Tuesday, November 18, 2008

Poetic Passion

pablo neruda
I've been reading a little Spanish poetry lately, inspired by an assignment I had for comp lit to present a close reading of a foreign language poem in class. Although I probably don't have the time I've been spending surfing poetry sites online, it's always wonderful when an assigment ignites a keen interest in something, and I never feel like time is wasted when I'm learning about something exciting or following a passion.

One poet I became particularly smitten with is Pablo Neruda. I had read some of his stuff before but had never really delved very deeply into his impressive repertoir. Neruda (a pen name) was a Chilean poet, a politically active Communist, and famous for his accessible poetry written for the common man (1904 - 1973). I have posted one of my favorite poems below--I also posted a translation, though I must say, something is definitely lost in translation.


Oda a los calcetines
de Pablo Neruda

Me trajo Mara Mori
un par de calcetines,
que tejió con sus manos de pastora,
dos calcetines suaves como liebres.
En ellos metí los pies
como en dos estuches
tejidos con hebras del
crepúsculo y pellejos de ovejas.


Violentos calcetines,
mis pies fueron dos pescados de lana,
dos largos tiburonesde azul ultramarinoa
travesados por una trenza de oro,
dos gigantescos mirlos,
dos cañones;
mis pies fueron honrados de este modo
por estos celestiales calcetines.


Eran tan hermosos que por primera vez
mis pies me parecieron inaceptables,
como dos decrépitos bomberos,
bomberos indignos de aquel fuego bordado,
de aquellos luminosos calcetines.


Sin embargo, resistí la tentación
aguda de guardarlos como los colegiales
preservan las luciénagas,
como los eruditos coleccionan
documentos sagrados,
resistí el impulso furioso de ponerlas
en una jaula de oro y darles cada
día alpiste y pulpa de melón rosado.


Como descubridores que en la selva
entregan el rarísimo venado verde
al asador y se lo comen con remordimiento,
estiré los pies y me enfundé
los bellos calcetines, y luego los zapatos.
Y es esta la moral de mi Oda:
Dos veces es belleza la belleza,
y lo que es bueno es doblemente bueno,
cuando se trata de dos calcetines
de lana en el invierno.



Ode to My Socks

Maru Mori brought me
a pair of socks
knitted with her own shepherd's hands,
two socks soft as rabbits.
I slipped my feet into them
as if into jewel cases
woven with threads of
dusk and sheep's wool

Audacious socks,
my feet became two woolen fish,
two long sharks
of lapis blue
shot with a golden thread,
two mammoth blackbirds,
two cannons;
thus honored were my feet
by these celestial socks.

They were so beautiful that for the first time
my feet seemed unacceptable to me,
two tired old fire fighters,
not worthy of the woven fire
of those luminous socks.

Nonetheless, I resisted the strong temptation
to save them the way schoolboys
bottle fireflies,
the way scholars hoard
sacred documents.
I resisted the wild impulse to place them

in a cage of gold and daily feed them
birdseed and rosy melon flesh.

Like explorers who in the forest
surrender a rare and tender deer
to the spit and eat it with remorse,
I stuck out my feet and pulled on
the handsome socks, and then my shoes.
So this is the moral of my ode:
twice beautiful is beauty
and what is good is doubly good
when it is a case of two
woolen socks in wintertime.


I absolutely love this poem; it seems to be so profound in its simplicity. Sometimes I feel like poetry is so contrived and even bombastic that it becomes a form of expression inaccessible to the common man. But poetry to me is such a natural and organic outlet of emotion and ideas that it can be understood by any human being. Neruda approaches the poem with a very personal voice and simple language, and is almost comical in his subject choice. But his theme emerges with such unaffected wisdom that we see the inherent and unpretentious truth in it. Rather than a traditional ode to some grandiose person or object, Neruda's is to a pair of wool socks; but in the wintertime, when you have cold feet, what could be more important?

2 comments:

Mom said...

Have you read "Oda a la cebolla" or "Oda a la alcacholfa"? He's written an entire book that if I remember correctly is called "Odas elementales" of homages to simple things. Poema 20 is perhaps the most famous of his love poems. Are you familiar with it? Written or at least published when he was your age.

Bill said...

The doggerel retort:

For those of us with tender feet
There's really nothing quite so sweet
As soft thick socks to keep them warm
And guard your feet from undue harm.

Yet though the socks engulf the feet
You must add shoes to be complete.
Thus these two pair are symbiotic,
(To have but one is idiotic.)

It's all about your comfort, see?
And not fashionability.
Save sentiment for your repose,
When working, be kind to your toes.